Hello. Haven't made one of these in a while, so I thought I'd give it a go. I made this out of a sudden inspiration...was meant to be a different render, but I couldn't find it.



I don't really know what to say to this one. I'm not too sure it's good. I know the text stinks. :/ Please leave some C&C.

Edit: Just noticed it's WAY too bright. I'll try and fix that.

Here's a darker V2:

Ooh very nice. I do think hat it would look good with a different text, like a type of script/cursive or something. Also something abut her middle seems off. Did you smudge it?

Thanks

Not at all... when I scaled it it kind of blurred in spots. It was at least 4 times that size before I scaled it.

I would get rid of the text all together.

And the render is still too light IMO.

I agree with Palagrin, the render is pretty bright.

The text, if you want any, should probably be smaller and at a lesser opacity. Where it is right now just detracts from the sig, in my opinion.

Just my 2 cents

And the font needs to change, it doesn't really fit. Or move the text.

I agree with Palagrin, move the text. I rather do like the font though.