I'm quite plaesed with this one; I love the colours.



The font is poop, I need to change it at some point...

Full Poem:

Wrong will be right, when Aslan comes in sight,
At the sound of his roar, sorrows will be no more,
When he bares his teeth, winter meets its death
And when he shakes his mane, we shall have spring again.

C&C Pleasio

EDIT: Fixed text etc



Update:



EDIT: Poop, that white secton.

This one is much improved:

Please just edit the first post, instead of double posting.

The forth version is the best, it all blends a little bit better, but there's some serious blending issues going on still. I'm not a fan of the pixel effect that you have going through the middle, as it creates too much of a huge change between the stock and the stuff you've got on the right side. I think instead of doing things like that to transition the sig from focal point to background, you should work more to blend it all together. I don't really know how to describe what to do other than just saying to make it look like everything in the sig belongs together, rather than just being put together. Does that make any sense?

Cool, thanks.



Any better?

Yeah. Much better with less of the pixely stuff.

The smoky line was bugging me. New one:

Try reducing the brightness and increasing the contrast of the render. It seems kinda faded compared to the colors of the background. Also, I think that it ought to be moved slightly to the right.

Hopefully this is slightly better:



and a bit more:



and another:

The black area to the left of Lucy, something should be there.

Yeah to the left of Lucy, something just looks weird there. Try adding something, maybe a fractal brush. Otherwise, it's really good. The one before the last version is the one I like best.