I was looking for just the right inspiration or making a Zack Fair sig from Final Fantasy VII Crisis Core, and brisingr is fire's Cloud Strife one just did it for me. All thanks to you BIF.

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(The line on the bottom was completely by accident, (Photobucket screw up) but I actually like it.)

I'm rather liking these at the moment. Any C&C to help?

Okaaaaay....

v1: Render is good, nbut white thing is distracting. You need something to draw to the render. And white is just to livid.

v1.2: Same as above, but the text is not brill. Change the colour, lower the opacity, move it somewhere else; and perhaps, change the font.

v2 and 2.1; same as both above, and the second render is horrible; get rid of him. He draws to much attention.

There you are. I'm wasn't really in the mood to C&C, but since you haven't had any....

Well, thank you very much Pala. No one was posting on it.

Anyways, The white bit is supposed to be the main focal actually, hence it standing out much more.

In that case, the render is too distracting. I would have the main focus on the render, if I were you. And the guy under the white stuff distracts to, by the way.

If the focus is on the white, do something to the render. the white ends too abruptly. It makes the black seem out of place. You need to makes it so the white fades into the black.