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Palagrin
Yeah, I ripped the name of an Enya album....

I know it's arya, but I couldn't resist not making a sig with the stock. Even though it's quite simple, I actually like it.



C&C please, but I might not be able to reply for 10 days or so. But plaese do comment.
pityonmurtagh
The image is gorgeous, but I'm not too sure of the lines. Also the BG doesn't really fit with Sienna, it's too sharp.
Palagrin
Okay, thanks. I'll see what I can do.
Kari&Gatomon
I'm staring more at the background than at Arya.

Also, if you look closely, there appear to be some lines on the render's face. That really subtracts from the render's quality. See if you can fix them.

Also, I only saw the text when I thought; 'OK, time to comment on the text'. That might be my bad vision, but I don't think the text stands out enough.
pityonmurtagh
I agree about the text. It's too transparent, and the color doesn't really fit with the rest of the background. It's too bright.
Quoth the Raven
I think the text should be slid over to next to Sienna's neck, otherwise it feels like you have to look around. The scanlines don't really look all that good, although it kind of unifies the whole thing. Maybe if they weren't as opaque?
Kari&Gatomon
I'd suggest up to the right of her eyes. And smaller. That could look good for the text.
pityonmurtagh
I think it would look odd in the center of the sig.
Palagrin
QUOTE (Quoth the Raven @ Aug 23 2009, 05:40 PM) *
I think the text should be slid over to next to Sienna's neck, otherwise it feels like you have to look around. The scanlines don't really look all that good, although it kind of unifies the whole thing. Maybe if they weren't as opaque?


To the left of her neck?

The scan lines are pretty transparent. I'll see how much more they will go.
pityonmurtagh
Maybe where Palagrin is?
Quoth the Raven
I meant the right. Oops. I need more sleep.
Palagrin
Okay, I'm back from hols, so:



Tadaa!
Quoth the Raven
Yeah, that's what I meant. =P It looks pretty good, maybe you should chop off a little of the right?
Palagrin
You mean to crop it?

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