I've been making Final Fantasy Seven tags for a while now, I blame the fact that I'm still playing the game, but hey, at least I'm making sigs, right?
'Nother Vert, C&C Please

I do like it, but, I'm not so fond of the coloring. It's just too bland. Also,his shoulder cuts off way too sharply for my tastes. The text is horrible, it doesn't fit at all. It's too formal feeling, if you understand me.

Oops!
I didn't even notice that the font for "Rufus" changed to match my signature, I needa fix that.

and at the shoulder, it was either shoulder and air, or shoulder and rude, you know?
I'm not exactly the best at cutting renders yet....

Brighten the colors up a bit and make them sharper. That is the only thing that should really be changed.

His shoulder kinda adds a dramatic effect for him, I don't know why. I like it.

I just think you should smudge it a bit on the edge to soften it. But hey, it's your tag, do what you think is right.