So, when I saw magic as the them, my mind immediately jumped to Harry Potter.

V1

V2: Added Text



V3: Different Text


C&C?

Get rid of the Harry side and just use the volde render coa it is awesome.

Told you before dude, duel render is bad unless done properly.

Yeah, I agree. They just clash each other. And doing just Volde would be just wicked awesome.

The blending from red to blue just doesn't seem right to me. Harry's face seems to be squeezed and his body isn't really proportioned right. I know I'm not much of a great sig artist (one of THE worst), but those are just some things I can see.

Also, it feels kinda unbalanced, since Harry is smaller than Voldy. If you want to stick with dual render, it might look better if you enlarged Harry, flipped him horizontally, and moved him closer to Voldy (or Voldy closer to him) so their hands are tangent.

I would flip him, but the red cuts off at a right angle, and I don't have the skill to smudge it.


That's the way it came, so I don't think it's squished.


That's the point.


Thoughts on the text?

Then you probably should at least put them closer together. The splitting isn't good at all.

The separated text is better IMO, but why does the first one with text have it up so high?

Better?

Yeah, they're both better. Harry still looks a little disproportionate, though. Could you flip it around? Other than that, I like it.

I would choose V2, in the others the the text is often unnoticed.

I could flip it, but it'd be diffiicult.

Don't worry about it, I don't even do graphics, just my observations.

I appreciate the advice.


Narrowed it down to two.