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Palagrin
Well, it's been very quiet in the graphics section so i thought I'd change that...



C&C if you wish...
Pixel
I think....Oh, whats that guys name? We'll just call him Bill. D.gif I think Bill is washed out a little. Can you make it a little less bright?
kingfloat
Yeah, that cracka needs to be toasted. And the desing kind of behind/above the W in DRAW is kind of making DRAW hard to read.

It also feels like something is missing from the right side.


HFS you should put th face of the sick king who sauroman (spl?) is possessing on the right...
LyriantheFirst
QUOTE (kingfloat @ Sep 22 2009, 05:30 PM) *
Yeah, that cracka needs to be toasted. And the desing kind of behind/above the W in DRAW is kind of making DRAW hard to read.

It also feels like something is missing from the right side.


HFS you should put th face of the sick king who sauroman (spl?) is possessing on the right...


You forget, it could also easily be Dumbledore there.

James
Palagrin
QUOTE (kingfloat @ Sep 22 2009, 09:30 PM) *
Yeah, that cracka needs to be toasted. And the desing kind of behind/above the W in DRAW is kind of making DRAW hard to read.

It also feels like something is missing from the right side.


HFS you should put th face of the sick king who sauroman (spl?) is possessing on the right...


See if I can fix the W.
If I added to the righyt hand side, it would draw from the focus and therfore just be worse. Also, if I added saruman, the flow would die completly.

Pixel: It doesn't seem to bright for me...Are you sure?


Not sure if it has changed noticeably, but I tried to keep the design as much as I could.
Pixel
Well...I think you're right. At a second glance it doesn't seem so bad. Maybe all the white on him made me think that it was too bright. I didn't find the word "Draw" hard to read though. I only noticed after it was pointed out.
Palagrin
Yeah, I wanted it to be bright to signify his pureness...if you get what I mean xD
pityonmurtagh
I rather like this one, but the white around the cloak is so bright, it makes the image blend together.
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