I followed a tut for this one...Obviously different renders etc.



Like it? Dislike it? Comment!

Stock: Katanaz

I like it. There's not enough focus around the render though.

Yeah, I agree. Tis quite ahrd finding the best C4Ds..

Anyways:

Smaller canvas works much better.

The style is good, but it needs more blended in with it.

Works well as something to build upon.

Hopefully this is an improvement:
Old:

New:


How else could I blend it more?

Newest version is the best. However, the sig is monotone. Try using a couple of different good colours together when making a sig.

I like the new one better, but I think it is still a bit too dark on the left.

I like it, I think the darkness on the left helps with contrast.

Thanks.Bit o' extra yellow in this next one:

Love'n the tunnel effect. Really good compared to the first one in the thread. I think the added yellow needs to be a bit les subtle.

It just needs a text 'n' border similar to this (yeah, I know its not brilliant):

Ummm, you nicked my sig! xD

The border is cool, but I don't really like the text...

The hunk of C4D on the right could be made more opaque and lens blurred, maybe. The bit in the bottom right hand corner.

I'm not really sure what this C4D looks like as a whole, but objects blurred in the forground create pretty cool depth of field. Just be sure not to overdo the bluring.

The border needs to be a tad softer (as in, less contrass evillookingness) and bend the text a bit more to fit the black band properly.
I think its all set after that.

Tis blurred as requested, and it looks pretty cool! Also, border is less 'evil' xD and text is adjusted.

I don't like the new one :S. The blur didn't really help the depth and the text doesn't look too great in my opinion.

I like it. The placement of the text is nice.... who's the picture of?

Its a stock from the link I posted in my first post...

Anyway, Zenron, I kinda agree with you, so swoosh...POM: the text placement was good, but the actual font just didn't work.

POM? I hadn't posted in a week, due to my suspension...

Welcome Baaaackk!! I missed you.

@Pally: are you gonna make it your sig?

Sorry, I meant HJP. And yes, probably...