brisingr is fire
Oct 12 2009, 05:29 PM

Kyle and I are going at it again, and this is my entry this time around.
I like to think I've improved, but C&C please, as harsh as you like.
EDIT: Forgot Img Tags
HJP
Oct 12 2009, 05:34 PM
I gotta say, it looks pretty nice. The colors and textures, etc, all compliment each other very well. I'm not sure what to criticize.
Pixel
Oct 12 2009, 06:03 PM
I think the text could be put somewhere else. It is refreshing to see it somewhere other than in a corner, but I think it's distracting right in front of his nose like that. It's almost like he's angry at the letters and is trying to stare them down. XD
Kid_Gimper
Oct 20 2009, 08:07 PM
Hey James, I'll get to work on mine most likily on thursday in Higgin's since you will end up nearly forcing me into it, (rape lol). I can not wait to see who is actually better, * I know it is me* lol.
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