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otterwarrior16
a new one. please comment and critique!



mtbanger
Hands down your best.

Default it, 4srs.

Maybe try making the line at the bottom 100% opaque, there's nothing strictly wrong with how it is now, but I think it'd look better opaque (make it a pastel red/pink).

What was the stock? Looks like it could either be a drill bit or some film reels. It's probably neither.
Kari&Gatomon
My eyes burn. XD I think the color to the left is too bright and grungy, to be honest. Plus, I had some trouble with seeing/ spotting the text at first. Plus, I can't tell what I'm looking at. But all of these might just be me. XD

Sorry I can't analyze it any more.
otterwarrior16
MTB:

Thanks! Not sure what 4srs means, but I'm glad you think it's my best. Yeah, I was a little skeptical about the line at the bottom so I think I'll change it up a bit.
The stock is actually one of my own pictures from Paris. It's a metal fence with swirly things at the top. It was a neat gate.

Again, thanks.

KARI:

it doesn't look too bright to me, but it could be my resolution is a bit off. yeah, it might be a bit overgrungy. I tend to overwork things constantly, so thanks for your opinion. ).gif and the picture is what I mentioned in my response to MTB.
Kylar Starfire
I haven't seen many signatures, but I have seen a few of yours.

And this is by far the best of yours that I have seen thumbup.gif .

I think he means: For serious...?

Anyway, C4D is great, but the bar down the bottom really DOES ruin it for you thumbdown.gif. Make it opaque thumbup.gif
pityonmurtagh
For cereal?

I think this is your best by far, and I can't find much to Critique other than what's been said.
otterwarrior16
yes, 4 serious makes sesnse. Okay,l'll try making the bar opaque when I get back to my computer with the PSD file. ).gif thanks people!
mtbanger
4 supremely radical swans. Actually.

But yeah, default, 4srs.
Kari&Gatomon
Just saw; near the center of the image, it seems like something is on dissolve and is still set to that. I don't know if it's the grunge- style you used, but it looks a bit like noise to me. XD
Silver Ridrer
I think that i can say only that it is one cool picture.
pityonmurtagh
I think it's a bit too dark in the top left corner, it's hard to tell what's there.
otterwarrior16
supremely radical swans?? Okay, then. D.gif

KARI:

It's actually sharpening. I really wanted a very sharp look, even one that made it look like it was over sharpened.

SILVER:

Thanks very much!!

PITY:

well it's actually just blank space purposely left black. it fit better I think then something that might draw away from the other side.
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