otterwarrior16
Oct 19 2009, 02:44 PM
a new one. please comment and critique!
mtbanger
Oct 21 2009, 02:31 PM
Hands down your best.
Default it, 4srs.
Maybe try making the line at the bottom 100% opaque, there's nothing strictly wrong with how it is now, but I think it'd look better opaque (make it a pastel red/pink).
What was the stock? Looks like it could either be a drill bit or some film reels. It's probably neither.
Kari&Gatomon
Oct 21 2009, 02:34 PM
My eyes burn. XD I think the color to the left is too bright and grungy, to be honest. Plus, I had some trouble with seeing/ spotting the text at first. Plus, I can't tell what I'm looking at. But all of these might just be me. XD
Sorry I can't analyze it any more.
otterwarrior16
Oct 23 2009, 03:25 AM
MTB:
Thanks! Not sure what 4srs means, but I'm glad you think it's my best. Yeah, I was a little skeptical about the line at the bottom so I think I'll change it up a bit.
The stock is actually one of my own pictures from Paris. It's a metal fence with swirly things at the top. It was a neat gate.
Again, thanks.
KARI:
it doesn't look too bright to me, but it could be my resolution is a bit off. yeah, it might be a bit overgrungy. I tend to overwork things constantly, so thanks for your opinion.
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and the picture is what I mentioned in my response to MTB.
Kylar Starfire
Oct 23 2009, 05:15 AM
I haven't seen many signatures, but I have seen a few of yours.
And this is by far the best of yours that I have seen

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I think he means: For serious...?
Anyway, C4D is great, but the bar down the bottom really DOES ruin it for you

. Make it opaque
pityonmurtagh
Oct 23 2009, 07:59 AM
For cereal?
I think this is your best by far, and I can't find much to Critique other than what's been said.
otterwarrior16
Oct 23 2009, 09:21 AM
yes, 4 serious makes sesnse. Okay,l'll try making the bar opaque when I get back to my computer with the PSD file.
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thanks people!
mtbanger
Oct 23 2009, 10:56 AM
4 supremely radical swans. Actually.
But yeah, default, 4srs.
Kari&Gatomon
Oct 23 2009, 12:27 PM
Just saw; near the center of the image, it seems like something is on dissolve and is still set to that. I don't know if it's the grunge- style you used, but it looks a bit like noise to me. XD
Silver Ridrer
Oct 23 2009, 01:31 PM
I think that i can say only that it is one cool picture.
pityonmurtagh
Oct 23 2009, 04:49 PM
I think it's a bit too dark in the top left corner, it's hard to tell what's there.
otterwarrior16
Oct 24 2009, 11:53 AM
supremely radical swans?? Okay, then.

KARI:
It's actually sharpening. I really wanted a very sharp look, even one that made it look like it was over sharpened.
SILVER:
Thanks very much!!
PITY:
well it's actually just blank space purposely left black. it fit better I think then something that might draw away from the other side.
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